Six Sentence Sunday #22

Thank you for stopping by and for sharing your feedback week after week. Today’s contribution is from Swashbuckler, my WIP. Next week I’ll give some hints as to who Adam is (’cause he certainly isn’t Rodger!).

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Rachel was exactly where she wanted to be. She burrowed her toes deeper into the sand. It was warm on the top but quickly got cooler the deeper she dug. An inch further and the sand was damp. Her toes wriggled back and forth until they were covered up to her ankles–her hands started packing the sand down, smoothing the dark bits until there were no cracks.

β€œHave you ever been completely buried?” Adam asked, his shadow falling over her.

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26 thoughts on “Six Sentence Sunday #22

  1. Ooo, his question is kinda spooky, especially with his shadow falling over her πŸ˜‰ I love how you described the sand getting cooler the deeper her toes dug in. Nice six here, I would read more. πŸ™‚

  2. You paint such a vivid picture here – and all with words! πŸ™‚ Love it! I felt like I was experiencing what she was, and that question… What the hell does he mean by that?

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