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Fast forward from last week’s scene on the beach to happy hour at a local bar. Rachel and her co-workers are there, including Adam. Shannon is also there, a woman who has a history with Adam. She’s just asked Rachel if she has ever been in love.
“And then there’s Adam here,” Shannon said. Rachel winced. It was like watching a car crash, knowing it was coming but being unable to stop it from happening. “The man who has never given his heart to anyone.” Shannon paused, talking a swig of her beer–she was not smiling.
“Not true,” Adam said softly.