Weekend Writing Warriors and Snippet Sunday visitors, you’re in the right place! Below is a snippet from Swashbuckler, my contemporary romance that’s still a WIP. For those who visited last week, it won’t be a surprise that Rodger convinces Rachel to stay the night. I’ve skipped over those details to get to these details. Rodger’s first line, by the way, is asked as a rhetorical question.
“Do you mind if these hands do a little undressing?” he asked, his voice dropping to a sexy whisper as he began kissing Rachel’s neck again. Rodger took her sharp intake of breath as a yes. Sitting up, he moved his hands over her front, slowly releasing the buttons of her blouse.
“Could you go a little faster?” he heard Rachel ask. Her voice was just above an urgent whisper. He chuckled. This was going to be fun. He slowed his fingers down.
Here’s a link to the blurb for Swashbuckler >
And here’s this week’s eye candy from the movie Magic Mike. . .
Great excerpt, very sexy. Love the eye candy!
Nice fun and sensuous exchange. Had me laughing in a good way. Terrific snippet!
Go a little faster! OMG. She’s so honest and direct. Love it!!
So he likes to torture her a little more does he? Heh-heh. Good man.
Oh, the little tease! Very sexy, Karysa.
I love her desperate response and his counter with going even slooooower. Great description – loved it!
She needs to listen to the Pointer Sisters and appreciate a man with a slow hand. It comes in handy later on! 😉
Oh yes, there’s no need to rush LOL! Sexy little snippet, loved it!
Nice ‘Magic Mike’ photo. 🙂
Oh he’s evil… she wants him to move it along and he’s purposely slowing it down. lol Great snippet.
Yep. I love a little ‘torture’ in my romance.
Steamy and very well written excerpt. Great. 🙂
The opening dialogue had me giggling like a loon. Not good since I’m in a restaurant. Great, sexy snippet.
Haha. And that image made me laugh! 🙂
I love a woman who asks for what she wants. Nicely done, Karysa. 🙂
Love how he’s slowing things. Very nice, very sexy.
Just a thought, but you might consider dropping the word “down.” Just leave us with the image of those fingers 🙂
Whoa! sexy! I love the descriptions and how he slowed things down. Very nice and looking forward to next week. 🙂